Here are some simple tips for sprinkling non-verbal action tags (e.g. [laughs], [coughs]) into your dialogue or prose:
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Use sparingly
• One or two per scene is usually enough.
• Don’t let tags crowd the flow—use them to punctuate key moments. -
Keep the form consistent
• Always bracket the action:[laughs],[sighs],[coughs].
• Use present-tense, third-person singular verbs. -
Place tags for clarity
• Insert immediately before or after dialogue to cue tone:
– “Well, that was… surprising,” she says [laughs].
– [coughs] “Excuse me—could you repeat that?”
• If a tag interrupts a long sentence, set it off with commas. -
Let tags enhance emotion, not replace description
• Use them alongside—or instead of—adverbs sparingly.
• Don’t write[laughs]every time a character chuckles; reserve it for when the laugh itself matters. -
Match tag choice to the moment
•[clears throat]before something awkward.
•[shrugs]to show indifference. •[eyes widen]when surprised. -
Read it out loud
• Tags should feel natural in speech.
• If it sounds stilted, trim or rephrase.
Examples in context:
• “I won the race,” he says [grins].
• [sighs] “I really didn’t want to do that.”
• “Trust me,” she whispers [lowers voice].